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steepholm ([personal profile] steepholm) wrote2011-05-20 02:45 pm
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Syllabic Doodling

Supermarket Odyssey

A wide-eyed Odysseus
Lost among wild isles?
Why, dial Circe for directions!
You’ve been driving round for miles.

A wile-dyed Odysseus,
You find a space and park your car.
This Asda is your Ithaca:
Where the wide aisles are.
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[identity profile] veronica-milvus.livejournal.com 2011-05-20 02:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Cute! I like it!

[identity profile] cmcmck.livejournal.com 2011-05-20 02:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Nice! :o)

I always did like word play.
sovay: (I Claudius)

[personal profile] sovay 2011-05-20 03:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Why, dial Circe for directions!
You’ve been driving round for miles.

I like.

[identity profile] gold-alarm.livejournal.com 2011-05-20 07:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Like!
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[identity profile] strange-complex.livejournal.com 2011-05-20 08:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely! I hope you got home eventually. :-)
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